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                        2012一模英語優秀作文選登

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                        2012一模英語優秀作文選登

                        李雅婷 鄧昱爾 林津裕 蔣思敏 陳詩祺 程顯彬 廖筑秀 陳筱昕 譚朝輝 江蔚嵐

                         

                        2012廣州一??荚囍形倚S⒄Z平均成績為124(含口語);小作文(基礎寫作)平均成績為11.1(滿分15);大作文(讀寫任務)平均成績為17.4 (滿分25

                         

                        李雅婷 (14.5分)高三10班                   

                        Recently, we have carried out a survey whose theme was “the activities of middle school’s students in 2012 Spring Festival” among 368 middle school’s students. From the data, we are sorry to find that the majority of the students, about 45%, buried themselves in homework during the holiday in company with parents, pay a visit to their relatives and 25% of them preferred traveling with their classmates or parents. Never the less, the majority of the students felt pleasant about receiving a lot of lucky money, while a small part of them complained about the piles of homework and the lack of time for pleasure. Moreover, all the students were looking forward to a holiday with less homework and more spare time.

                        鄧昱爾 (14分)高三17

                        Recently, we did a survey among 368 middle school students, with the theme of “The activities of middle school students during the 2012 Spring Festival”. The survey showed that 45% of students stayed at home to do their homework and only 30% spent the vacation visiting their relatives with parents. The next 25% went to travel with either their parents or their classmates during the vacation. Yet, most people enjoyed themselves at the Spring Festival because they received a lot of lucky money while others were depressed form too much homework occupied the time they should play. All in all, students were calling for a Spring Festival which allows more leisure time and less homework.

                        林津裕 (14分)高三17班                          

                        Recently, we have conducted a survey with the theme of “The Spring Festival Activities of Senior Students in 2012” among 368 senior students and here are the results. During the Spring Festival, 30% of them visited relatives with parents, one in four went traveling with friends or parents and the rest stayed at home to finish their homework. According to the survey, most of the students had a good time because they had received lots of lucky money. Oppositely, still some were so over-burdened with their homework that they couldn’t enjoy themselves. In a word, all of them were eager to have less homework and more free time in order to relax themselves in such a celebrating festival.

                        蔣思敏 (14分)高三(6)班

                            Recently, a survey entitled student's activities in the 2012 Spring Festival was carried out among 368 students. According to the survey, 30% of the students visited their relatives with their parents while 25% of them traveled with classmates or friends. In addition, 45% of the students choose to stay at home to finish their homework. Most of them spent a good time for receiving a large sum of lucky money while some students, however, complained that they didn't get enough time to entertain with too much homework. Students expect they could have less homework as well as more free time.

                        陳詩祺 (14分)高三(6

                        Recently, a survey has been conducted among 368 middle school students on their activities during the 2012 Spring Festival. As is shown from the data, almost half of the students spent their Spring Festival at home occupied by homework. Meanwhile, 30% of them mainly took the pleasure of visiting relatives or friends with their parents, while 25% of them enjoyed themselves traveling with parents or classmates. When asked about their feelings, most of the students expressed contentment for the large sum of lucky money they received, but part of them were not that happy complaining that the mountainous homework had deprived them too much time for entertainment. All in all, it is the students' expectation that there will be less homework but more time for leisure.

                         

                        程顯彬 (4+19 = 23分)高三(6)        

                        Dear mum,

                        You have expressed your concerns over my studies because I have devoted too much time to the student clubs, which influences my academic performance. You believe that I should focus on my studies.

                        I appreciate your concerns and your sincere advice. When I am confused about how to keep a balance between studies and relaxation, you are always there to support me and lead me to the right path.

                        However, I don't quite agree on your opinion. Despite the significance of studies, being buried in studies for a long time is likely to bring no further benefit than stress and exhaustion. As the saying goes, all work and no play make Jack a dull boy. Therefore, I am convinced that proper amount of time spent on those activities will benefit both my studies and my health.

                        I promise that more time and effort will be put into my studies. Moreover, I can assure you that my participation in the activities won't exert a negative influence on my studies.

                                                                                        Love,

                                                                                             David

                        廖筑秀 (5+19 = 24分)高三(6

                        Dear mum,

                        From your perspective, I am participating in too many activities and students clubs, which distracts me from study and affect my academic performance. So you ask me to focus more energy on study.

                        I am very sorry that I have made you worried about my study. I didn't realize the negative aspects of participating in activities and student clubs before I read your letter. Nothing in the world can be more discouraging than making you worried about me.

                        I am fully convinced by your point of view. For one thing, as a middle school student, I have to engage myself in study rather than activities, because only when I study hard enough can I get a promising future. For another thing, various activities may attract my attention and make me exhausted, thus depriving my ability to listen to classes carefully.

                        As I have realized the disadvantages of participating in too many activities, I will promise you that I will spare no effort to study instead of wasting my previous efforts and focus less on activities and student clubs.                                                             Love,

                                                                                             David

                        陳筱昕 (5+19 = 24)高三13

                        Dear mum,

                        According to your e-mail, you said I spent too much time on after-school activities, which may be affecting my studies. Being worried about this, you thought I should focus on my studies at first.

                        I feel so embarrassed that I bring lots of troubles to you because of my laziness in study. Thanks for your care and I am also sorry that my poor behavior in school makes you feel worried.

                        As for me, I approve of your view. From my personal angle, I consider that after-school activities can broaden my horizon and improve the ability of communication. However, I ignore that too many kinds of activities will also have a harmful effect on my study. I think your opinion is right, my main duty is study, and I should concentrate.

                        To solve this problem, I will leave some of the student clubs which I am not very interested in and pay more attention to my study. But I don’t  want to give up all of my after-school activities, I promise that those activities won’t  affect my study too much. I really want to keep on devoting myself into my hobbies, so I wish you can understand my feeling.

                        Thank you for reading my letter.

                        Love, 

                        David

                        廖筑秀 (5 +19 = 24)高三6

                        Dear mum,

                        From your perspective, I am participating in too many activities and student clubs, which distracts me from study and affect my academic performance. So you ask me to focus more energy on study.

                        I am very sorry that I have made you worried about my study. I didn’t realize the negative aspects of participating in activities and student clubs before I read your letter. Nothing in the world can be more discouraging than making you worried about me.

                        I am fully convinced by your point of view. For one thing, as a middle school student, I have to engage myself in study rather than activities, because only when I study hard enough can I get a promising future. For another thing, various activities may attract my attention and make me exhausted, thus depriving my ability to listen to classes carefully.

                        As I have realized the disadvantages of participating in too many activities, I will promise you that I will spare no effort on activities and student clubs.

                        Love, 

                        David

                        江蔚嵐(23分)高三 1

                        Dear mum,

                        I know you are worried about my study as I spend too much time in student clubs, which starts to affect my study and you want me to focus on my study.

                        After reading your letter, I feel so sorry because my performances make you worried and even disappointed. But I disagree with you on the point that joining student clubs will damage my study.

                        It is known to all that the main task for a student is to study. But what I can learn in textbooks is inadequate for me to face such a changeable world. Instead, by joining student clubs, I am able to learn social skills, practical abilities, as well as leadership capacities. Although the effects of these abilities cannot be seen in short term, they are surely beneficial to my future. What’s more, taking part in student clubs can help to relieve me when I am in school. I remember a time when I was very impatient and depressed after a long time of study, it was those interesting activities in the student clubs that rid me of my anxiety and stress.

                        However, I will also take your advice and try my best to balance my time in activities and studies. I promise that I will devote more time and energy to my study and I am in the hope of having your understanding and support.    

                        譚朝輝(23 分)高三(1

                        From your letter, I know that you are worried about my study because I have joined different kinds of after-school activities clubs, which affects my performance at school. And you want me to focus more on my study.

                        After reading the letter, I feel ashamed that I am too busy to have a face-to-face talk with you. Also, I can feel the great love you show to me and I am grateful for your care.

                        I think your suggestion makes sense. At this stage of my life, study is the most important part, because it will make my future brighter. As for after-class activities or student clubs, they are just ways to enrich my life. Joining clubs can broaden my horizons and improve my abilities, so it is beneficial to me. However, joining too many clubs will cause lots of time, which makes me tired and sleepy in class. As a result, I should just spare a small part of time to take part in activities. I have a classmate, who spent most time in joining clubs, failed in the exam finally. And I don’t want to be like that.

                        In a word, I feel sorry for my previous behaviors, and I promise I will spare no effort to improve my study. Besides, I will leave some clubs. Mum, your love makes me feel clear, and my road ahead is clear, too. Thank you for your suggestion.

                                                        

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